All Comments on 'Jenn Ch. 01'

Couldn't get past even half of the first page because there were major errors in almost every sentence. There may be a good story here, but I couldn't understand anything because you failed to proofread & edit.

Great story I think Jenn really wanted to fuck all of them but she knew

without a doubt she wanted Johnny

Got to finish these strikes don't leave people hanging

I would go for it

Good story so far. Never pay attention to any of the anonymous comments they never have anything positive, or constructive to say.

Anonymous keeps criticizing everyone's writing bit is too chi Jen to leave his name. I delete his comments. He doesn't matteri