All Comments on 'Jenna Ch. 03: Playing Games'

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impo_60impo_60about 9 years ago
A married whore!!!

This is a married whore!!! The question: Why a whore like her marries? 1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The problem with blackmail

Is that it gets you serious prison time now...of course, maybe these two guys enjoy getting fucked up the ass because rapists aren't well received in prison. And yes, if you're blackmailing a person into a sex act, then it's rape.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Get an editor

Then get a decent storyline. This was awful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting idea....

....full of cumuppance, but pretty choppy with the constant change in POV.

Interesting story idea.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Always

The whores last line is always that they want more.

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