All Comments on 'Jenny Goes To Town'

Please read your stories carefully before posting them. This is full of silly spelling mistakes and missing words. If you are too lazy to read your story through, why should we?

Also, I'd be careful about using "fanny". Most of the readers here are American and the meaning in American English is not the same as in British English.

Ditto's on Anon. above. Learn when to end a sentence and how to punctuate, as well as filling in missing words, and it coud be enjoyable. Get an independent editor.