All Comments on 'Jenny's Journey Ch. 01'

by spankmytentacle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Chapter 2!

please post chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This was artful

Not a lot of such high quality mom/daughter stuff here so I'm so much happier to see this one done so artfully and with precise loving touch. No rush, no nonsense, no silly fetishism, everything in just the right amounts and with a loving end that promises s lot more. Really looking forward to the next chapter(s).

5*!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
NOW THAT WAS A GOOD STORY

I am rarely so entertained from reading a Mother and Daughter Incest story as I have been by reading your work.

Thanks for putting this one together.

swfb70swfb70over 7 years ago
wow

I am looking forward to chapter 2

nikycnikycover 7 years ago

Love it Mr Tentacle!

Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great!

Looking forward to Chapter Two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Superb

This is very well written, with superb description. The attention to detail is fantastic, without becoming too much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Looking forward to more

As stated, very well written, without the usual language. I enjoy these kind of stories and loved this one. Cannot wait for more. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Beautiful

Well written and sensuous. Please more chapters and only mother and daughter please

Hugs amy xxooxx

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Yummy!

This is really good! I hope there's more! Thank you!

MistressJoannaMistressJoannaover 7 years ago

I'm very pleased to have been able to work with you on this! It's a brilliant story! I look forward to working with you again x MJ x

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More and then more, with a side of more!

I need more! Please continue writing and sharing here. I hope you are able to overcome your hangups and hangups about overcoming them if it helps you in life. if it means you will not share more stories then I vote to keep your hangups, because I am a huge fan of this story so far.

It was very erotic and sensual without including the ridiculous abnormally sized body parts. I appreciate it very much when writers do not try to force their own view of attractive on me. You allowed me to decide, and I will always enjoy stories where that is possible. Thank you!

Biguy46Biguy46over 7 years ago
Lesbian

Omg that was fabulous story. Please I hope you continue Jenny's and her mother sexual encounter. Lesbian affair.

hornier_bastardhornier_bastardover 7 years ago
well done

You write well, and it's a fun read.

On a personal note about a pet peeve of mine, there's finally an author here that knows the difference between a vulva and a vagina... thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well written, well done!

An excellent short story, and I hope to see more.

spankmytentaclespankmytentacleover 7 years agoAuthor
Chapter 02 is pending right now

Jenny's Journey Ch. 02 is in the "pending" queue right now and should be available very shortly. Thank you very much for your kind words about Chapter 01, I hope you enjoy Chapter 02 just as much!

The Tentacle

PanzerFeckPanzerFeckover 7 years ago
Short and Sweet

Just what it needed to be. Great effort.

MistressJoannaMistressJoannaover 7 years ago

Very pleased to see this on here, Tentacle! We make a good team, and your writing is amazing :) You know where I am if you need my editing skills again xoxo MJ

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