All Comments on 'Jenny's Offer'

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A follow up chapter would be great, maybe another group session with Jenny and Katie both 5 months pregnant. Or follow up a couple years after the babies are born with a secon breeding of one of the girls.

Good read.....keep going.

Great story. Perfect combination of love and lust, with a fully believable premise.

Give us round two in the morning, just to make sure. My only thought was that his first load should have been used, since its the biggest. But it certainly was hot....

I hope you'll continue this! Thank you!

Your story is okay, but there are a few misfires with some wording. Not enough to kick it out of the rack, nut noticeable. Next chapter?

He came three times in less than an hour. He may have knocked up Jen, but not likely Katie. Guess he'll leave to fuck them a few more times. 😀 Lucky Dog! Hope there's a few more chapters to cum!

I totally loved the whole storyline! Believable and highly erotic for those of us who enjoy incest stories! Screw the typo's, you'll do better with the sequel!!!

More please

So did they get pregnant, come on and give us more. Sperm count was low from too much fucking so he had to do it again. Poor, lucky bastard.

Great fantasy and great writing keep up the good work!

The incest is the sex between mother and daughter, not between step-father and step-daughter.

excellent story line. I can see at least 2 more chapters. Then cums the next generation. please continue.

Keep going, has to be more chapters. AAAAA+++++

WAUW !

A cheating wife and a stupid cuck story!!

Great short story. It’s hard to earn 5 stars with a story this short, but you sure did. Good job!

Bill S.