All Comments on 'Jen's plan'

They are ridiculous. Let's break all vows of marriage so we can see how it feels.

Lord love a duck.

So you are here looking for a thrill. The tag line told you what the story was about. If you don't like that, why read, let alone comment?

Dick-head!

People are curious. Sex is sexy. Stick with it Ed - this does well what it does.

jst asking a person out of the blue if they want to fuck is NOT seduction.

Because he is much too old. Young guys do it better. They look better, feel better, smell better, and taste better.

Marvelous little story of sharing and making love exciting beyond the normal man-wife thing. It's always been a fantasy of mine to be like Dave and have a hottie for a wife who would make the fantasy come true. But why end it there? Doesn't Dave want to watch? Or better yet, participate?

The next door neighbor is a common theme, but your approach is much better than most. The set up between husband and wife is good, the pace is just right, the approach is plausible, the dialogue is fitting, the seduction is simple and clear, the sex scene is well done, her description to the husband is very good, and the twist at the end makes the story a step or two above the average.

Used up plotline, even fifteen years ago. Just boring.