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One of my favourites for sure

rofl, I so love this story. I just wish it was longer.... lol, so love, Penny Copper, Skye, Cinder, Rayne, Nova.... you could not have picked a better character set up with Jeremey..... thank you for a great read everyone.

completely ridiculous, but entertaining

This is a very interesting series. Bloody hell though, his dragons are ready to FUCK SHIT UP to defend him, even with the knowledge that it doesn't last, the deaths.

I am enjoying the story, but I'd be lying if I said most of the time I 'don't' want to slap these dragons... REPEATEDLY.

I know it's done for goofs and the whole "out of touch with the current century" vibe, but their incessant barrage of nonsensical actions and (disturbingly) blasé attitude to, ANYTHING serious, is really grinding my nerves.

Still having fun, just wanted to be honest

Don't worry, Anon, they'll only get sillier and more blasé about increasingly dire and dangerous situations!

(Same Anon the Author is replying to)

Well at least you're honest with your intentions.

Best of luck.

P.S. What's with the (current) obsession with gender-bending? I actually liked how it worked with Morgan, story-wise (essentially because she wished for it) ?

So I like the settings and the general story but holy he'll you writing style is chaos incarnate. I feel like if I gave a pen to a ferret high on meth and LSD it would produce something half as whiplash inducing as you have written here. After reading chapter 1 I was left with half a dozen question so went into chapter 2 in high hopes those questions would be answered but no I'm left with six to twelve new questions and every chapter is like that. I feel like there should be two or three serious/common sense conversation in each chapter but again no, we get a scene and then we get a dog squirrel moment and then we are off to the next scene nothing answered,nothing deeper.

I haven't read any of you other work yet I m hopeing the writing style is just for this story.

Part of me is looking forward to chapter 5 another part is hoping you redo this story with a bit less chaos squirrel energy because I can see do much potential in this story it could easily be epic and and easy 5star fave.

Nah, I have some much more serious, staid stories. The Long Shot, To Spite Another God, Delta-V...plenty of stuff that's way less "whacky" than this one.

But, like, I'm taking a vacation from writing anything serious or complicated or well thought out to just write something goofy and fun. So, like...

Expect zaniness!

Kinda lost me with the Penny teasing thing. Killed the harem fantasy a bit.. Oh well.

As good as this story is, you *really* gotta pay attention. To wit, this sentence: "Illusion Penny (Ienny?) had an expression on her face that was somewhere between speculative and raw lustf, her teeth dragging along her lower lip as her palms skimmed along her thighs."

raw lustf? Where's the rest of the word? So far all 4 chapters have been riddled with missed words and spelling errors. It gets very distracting and throws off my rhythm, because despite what the semi-literates say, that shit DOES matter!!

There is no 'rest of the word' it's...clearly "lust" with an accidental f on the end. Sorry, I do my best to catch those typos, but it does slip through my fingers!

Ah, one is understanding. My apologies as well, as I didn't think of just 'lust'. I was figuring the word to be lustfullness, and that you somehow forgot the rest.

Catra and Bow might have been the most outrageous thing I've heard in a while

This is a weird story but like it 4 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[17.04.24]

Mark gaped at her Korra-esque physique and immediately lost enough IQ points to think IQ was real.

-I like that you wrote this passage, because even the guy who modernised the I.Q. Test knew that it wasn't a true measurement of intelligence,

"Fuck it, we're doing it live!"

-Looove the Bill O'Reilly reference!

11/10!!!!!