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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start.

Very good but too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lovely

Actually, the shortness of this encounter is what makes it so sweet..

Well done..

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A Good Start, but...

Good writing! I would have enjoyed more descriptions of the two, more descriptions of the situation that led up to this wonderful event.

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