All Comments on 'Jess was a Bitch Ch. 12'

I really loved this story in the first few chapters, but its just lost its way now. Obviously the outsiders are still a huge issue. Incest porn never works well with outsiders, especially when its a couple, and on top of them also being incredibly annoying. On top of that the rapid perspective changes had me rereading sections, it was overly confusing for no apparent reason. I hope you finally figure where you want to go with this. I hope the outsiders finally find their way out of the original relationship. Because this is no longer incest, it's group sex. But, I think this chapter is where I bow out, I'm not gonna vote, doesn't seem fair given what i would give it. Maybe I'll be back in 3 or 4 chapters after the outsiders meet an untimely demise or something.

I love the entire story, every chapter per say. You have heated it to so many possible endings. Please keep writing.

Please keep going and for those who don't like Catlin and Travis tell them to take a walk and find a one page fluff yank peace, This is a story and Caitlin and Travis's help make it so.

Waitin' for more!!!

I'm getting close to the last chapter and i hope it has an actual ending and not a cliffhanger. Also really hope Jon and Jess end up together

Three relationships heading to the rocks. They swing, they lose. I have to question do these three couples really love their spouses?

They are more entranced by the thought of sex with others rather than their own partners.

James and Gloria were on the way out, they reconcile NOW they consider adding others to a conflicted relationship?

James is a latent cuckold, he is a bit sick in the head to want to watch his wife fuck others. Does he love Gloria, no.

Do this and they are doomed as a couple.

Does Jess really love Jon?

Given the way she keeps making moon eyes and wanting to have sex with both Travis and Caitlin, l think not. She’s in love with the idea of loving her brother, but she wants to share herself and her brother with others. She would even be happy for Jon and Travis to fuck. A solid relationship in the making?

I think not, they should be doomed as well. She wants to Cuck Jon just as Caitlin happily cucks Travis.

The Jon character, is clueless, a virgin teen being tossed around and overwhelmed by all the sex.

He loves Jess in his mind, but he wants sex with others. Another relationship doomed from the start. Jess IS a bitch, because she wants it all. She would even sleep with Mom and Dad, if the right situation presented itself. She is happy to Cuck her partner. They do not have a real incestuous relationship only a sexual relationship they mistakenly call true love.

They do not know what true love is.

Travis and Caitlin, we’ll their relationship is a cuckold relationship. Travis wants to watch and Catlin wants to fuck other men and women so he can watch. Their relationship is actually at the heart of the story. Caitlin’s desire to Cuck her husband as he wants, drives her to sleep with all the Vandermachs. Without this couple none of the story cuts the muster.

Long term their relationship is doomed as well. Travis is very needy in his wants and Caitlin is the enabler.

A complicated fucked up story with three fucked up couples all headed in the same ruinous direction.

But in the end this fantasy ignores all the problems generated and allows the three relationships that would not survive in real life..

Scores 2/5