All Comments on 'Jessa'

love the story please update soon

Hard to judge this. If it ends here then to abrupt 3.5 - 4. If this is a first chapter then 5 well really a ten. Well done.

It's hardly a question of strength. It's a question of decency and honesty, two qualities at which Torah has failed dramatically. Don't get me wrong, the story was interesting and erotic, but that line really soured it for me. It makes Torah appear entirely uninteresting in that he just glosses over the utter hypocrisy and deception he's been engaging in, and then he worries if he can 'keep her together' and if he's strong enough.

Strong enough to keep her together after the violation that he perpetuated? Oy.

I hope you continue!

Great first chapter! I'm so intrigued, can't wait for the next chapter!!!

You better have more chapters up and running fast Chimera44 that was the best start to a story I've read in ages. Don't keep us waiting too long please xx and don't let her give in to fast either It's more enjoyable to keep the non con going xx

i thought we had a forceful but nice guy turns out he is a total a..hole!!!! but please do keep writing...trs

A very enjoyable read, hopefully you'll carry on with this story as like another commentor mentioned this is one of the best starts to a story in a while. Good job on the story and keep up the good work.

5/5 stars :)

I absolutely loved this. Please don't make me wait a long while for the next installment.

KUDOS!

I'd genuinely read a novel based around this premise, I want to know so much more about the world and the characters. (And damn good erotica ontop)

I hope you plan to write more. One of the things I want to know more about is why exactly Jessa is so against marriage in the first place. It's clear she has a very bleak outlook on her life as a wife/proginator to a tenth circle, but it's not clear if her outlook is accurate or not. Also, I want to know how Torah feels about taking her choice away. I guess I just want you to write more in the hopes that more of this culture will be explained.

Although I knew something was wrong about Torah, I couldn't put my finger on it. Great pacing and great way to just let the exposition and world building trickle out as needed rather than hitting us with some huge prologue.

I really liked your story. Can't wait for the next part.

Hope there is more to come with this story- great start & the world building is really well done.

He could have convinced her to marry him in a few more days. But to invade her privacy, force her hand and impregnate her?? Unforgivable. Or it would be if she wasn't already halfway in love with him.

So curious about what happens next. Looking forward to more.

Please give us more to this story. I want to know what happens next!

I am very curious about her future and the10th Circle. Escape/chase possible? I think Jessa is a spoiled brat. Torah will be good for her. It may take alot of time (yea, more chapters) and cunning on his part to outmaneuver her. Dominance would be good. Thank you for your time and efforts. Gee, don't mean to write the story for you! You do just fine on your own.

i love your story and hope for hea but really hope she gives him hell as well cause he is wrong in what he did and hope for a lot of chapters

This was a great start to a story, and I hope we'll be hearing more of Jessa and Torah soon. :-)

I was wondering why he was named after a pile of scribbles done in favour of the patriarchy.

Very well written and thoroughly repugnant. I don't often comment on other comments but the person who said Jessa is a spoiled brat needs some special time in the common area of a sex-starved prison population.

I'm so very, very...very angry at what her family, society and now this guy have done to her. I hope I make it through the story without smashing my phone against a wall. You are always an interesting writer.

This was a super nice start! Can't wait for the next chapters!

...me in.

I saw you had 15 chapters here and decided to read Ch. 1 and see if it sucked me in. It did, it totally did. Sigh. Now I have to read the next 14 chapters, lol.

I'm looking forward to it. I'm loving it so far. I'm also interested in finding out why she's so opposed to marriage and babies.

I love the way you make her a real person

Great story beginning from one of the best writers ever on the site.

For anyone not sure, that first encounter was definite rape

COVID 19 definitely makes this story seem like a possible future for the human race. Damn.

damn i am so jealous of jessa and torah

had jessa been not so tall and strong torah might have not even looked at her

also torah was attracted to the fact that jessa isnt one of those marriage crazy chick infact she doesnt care if she remains alone for a lifetime sad but strong and realistic mindset

its bitter that torah has approach ed her through friendship only ending up raping her and dropping the baby bomb

it seems so painful that despite the fact that jessa despite realising torah types her ideal guy isnt a bit intetested in him at all ,she trust him as a friend ,looks at him as a friend the thing jessa kept on admirinig about torah was that he never looked her in the wrong way ,kept on giving imp to their friendship and have a platonic relationship ,even when he commented about her looking hot he later appologised for the vulgar comment

and all only leading to the fact that torah is infact as dirty minded as any guy when it comes to jessa how he kept on fooling her that he just want her company and friendship

its too bizzare to have a very attractive high in demand husband material claiming just to be friend while having nasty dirty romantic about thoughts about you all along in his mind and would act upon it by forcing himself on you instead of confessing his feelings to you with zero guilt but he is serious about you since he not only enjoys sex with you but he enjoys talking to you too, laughing with you,crying with you ,telling his deep secrets to you,trusting you ,he can see you as a mother of his babies,he can see himself growing old with you with him in your arms without you having a single idea about his feelings and carnal desires for you since you see him just as a good friend the one he pretends to be for you to see

i know a lot of hot girls who never wanted to marry but ended up marrying their super sexy hot guy best friends and had no idea until the guy proposes and these marriages last longer than the ones where instant attraction is mutual

in these kind of relationship both the girl and guy get to know each other on platonic level not only sexual they can appreciate both the good things and bad things w/o the hog created by sex and lust which prevent them from looking into the true nature of your partner

the way torah get to know jessa was really nice he knows her understand her admires her for all she is and she feels the same about him they both see each other as ideal

the only diff is they are on diff pages in life he wants to marry and settle and she wants her freedom ,enjoy her singlehood and disgust of boring marital life

which is quite rare in both the gender

torah isnt a bad guy at heart surely he used rape and trick to get her so that assuring her hand into marriage instead of coming clean to her and giving her a chance to accept him or reject him

i really admire both

torah for being capable of finding and falling for a really nice ,pure and strong minded women jessa who doesnt give a damn about guys

and jessa she is so cool aloof strong willed girl she isnt afraid of being alone and doesnt give to temptation or lust for even the hottest guys like torah which i am sure any girl wont let go guys like torah are dream come true and yet jessa is so not bothered that she may lost him for another hotter girl

most of the guys avoid jessa but still she isnt sad she is just happy going just pleased with herself in her little world instead of pleasing any guy

i never read a story like this loved it every single min of it ,both jessa and torah are awsome and both are highly so unreal

10/10 from me awsome