All Comments on 'Jesse's Journey Down a Rabbit Hole Ch. 10'

this gets better and better. just wish we could get more chapters faster.

Just keeps getting better and hotter. The two of you, working together, are making one great story for the readers. Just keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Great job!!!

This story started out Strong and very Hot.....this latest chapter is starting to circle the drain....any Master letting everyone control his subjects is weak himself.....this lifestyle doesn't advert to the chance of losing one's ho.e finances or total humiliation of their families.....bring it back to a bit more realistic lifestyle

When is the dude gonna get TITS, the pills and shots will give him tits right ????

This continues to get better and I can't wait to see how the home visit goes. Great story and great pictures! Keep it going.

The Grabas family is one strange group! It's amazing how quickly Julie's transformation from a nice college girl into a sex slave willing to do almost anything came about. But your stories are good reads, and I love the illustrations. I look forward to Chapter 11

Three cheers for fantasy, but erotica generally isn't looking to induce eye rolls and laughter. Not that you'd want to change anything because this is intentional excess, but there really isn't any way for these characters to salvage their lives, and thus the story. How long do you plan to torture us, I mean them?

PS. It is well written and excellently illustrated ridiculousness.

Does anybody else laugh every time that fat guy wearing orange shows up? He looks like a cartoon depiction of a middle-aged man on vacation. This story is ridiculous, and the characters don't act with any sort of logic at all.

Great story! john wife Mildred, john gives Marcus to her.

All getting a bit boring and monotonous now!

Actually, the family could be saved in one way...they could some how become part of an undercover sting operation. Let's say that Jesse ended up back on the streets or somehow got busted for prostitution and the Fed's made a deal with her and the family to make a sting to capture those in the sex slave business and blackmailed. The Fed's know about a guy calling himself Master x and want to capture him and if Jesse and her family help out....they can go on witness protection...with all new names and jobs...while bringing down the big dogs...