All Comments on 'Jessica'

Very nice story. Loved it.

Hmm, it was a decent story. Not sure about how the virgin card was played though, if daddy had been shoving his finger in her then he would have known ahead of time that she had a hymen, not later when he fucked her and she screamed and he thought 'shes a virgin!', lol. ....then again I always thiught daddies assumed their daughters were virgins unless they knew they werent ;)

Doo-Doo-Doo-Doo-Doo-doo-doo-doot-doo

(Final Fantasy victory music)

I Think you should write more about how good the sex was, that was great. Please write more...

Enjoyed your story-for a first-timer.Wished I could have done better, but maybe... Keep up the good work. will write more later

Pusygalore!!!!

Fuck those hypercritical assholes. The story was hot.

'..I let my arms fall, giving her an escape goat...'

In dire need of editing.

Stan

the extent readers could dwell on little tiny details amaze me sometimes, but I hope it doesn't discourage you, walls. After all... if one is a virgin when one is 19, then one might not immediately think it is cum sticking on her drawers. If the writer made Jessica thought that it was glue that stuck on her panties and that her dad just used them to wipe out the residue, thus dismissed the entire incident...we wouldn't be jerking off to this story, dontchathink?

Very erotic- this is fantasy, doesnt have to be real