All Comments on 'Jessica and Her Five Brothers'

I think it's in the wrong category. Ex step brothers don't count. Need some help editing tho. Amber 'reeked' of alcohol for example. Rather well written. Short but to the point. I'd enjoy reading another chapter or 2.

2 Stars

DragonRider55 Ret USAF

I would love to hear more about them!

All 5 guys did care for her and love her,

I liked the ending of the one “brother “ staying to to care for her.

I wanted him to stay and them to move in together in his apartment’

They marry and care for each other.

I really enjoyed this piece for its demonstration of consent, and importantly, aftercare, the depiction of a sexually adventurous woman who knows what she wants, and the absence of slut-shame toward Jessica. You write well. You have plenty of room to grow and perfect your art, but there's definite talent.

I would like to see more attention paid to Jessica's pleasure by the guys, especially since most women can't come from penetration alone, but that all said, good show. Very steamy. It was a nice treat to read.