All Comments on 'Jessica's First Time'

Not a bad story. I doubt that she would lick your cock first thing in the morning after taking her virginity, though. Unless you just forgot to mention that shower. ;)

Thanks for sharing your work.

Hot story idea but I couldn't even read very much of it. Too many sentences started with "I". You can write a first person story with more variety in the language. More creativity. "I kissed...I touched...I unbuttoned..."

I loved it. There are not many 1st time stories that are between really innocent and really vulgar. It is very relatable. A girl who has doubts about giving it up, but still wants to do it, and in the end, she was tied up so she has no guilt.

I normally do not like non-consent/reluctance because the person REALLY does NOT want it, but in this one she really does although she is having a moral dilemma.