All Comments on 'Jewels, The Next Day'

great start

More please! I'm really enjoying your writing! Great style!

Is this an actual event? If so then how lucky were you :P anyways I love your writing style. PLEASE continue this story. I can't wait to find out what happends next.

I like to read about teasing and seduction, so this is right up my alley.

Oh, and thanks for the soft-core food porn.

Yes I loved this part. It is so well done. Having self esteem issues myself I would love to have someone like Janson help me . Beautifully done.

Can't get much better odds than that. Jason is one lucky dog. Seeing the breasts of one would have been great, but all three--that's an eighteen-year-old's idea of heaven.

Loved it. Great story.

The interaction between the girls and Jason was sweet but also nicely provocative.

But the constant repetition of the "effects" of that one magazine on all three girls' self-esteem got a bit tedious and unrealistic after the third reference. Sounded less like a sexy encounter and more like a group therapy session, after a while.