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bornwildnfreeabout 7 years agoSome issues with tense, but otherwise entertaining. You open with, "Jezebel wakes up about 9...". Should be woke upto flow with the story.
Anonymousover 3 years agoSorry, I cannot read any more of this!
Do you really not know this is misspelled?
“ She put on some 4 inch healed red shoes”
Two sentences later ( Breasts- there are two of them)!
Purplefizz5 months agoHealed vs Heeled, this ancient history, but google/MS word spellcheck have a lot to answer for, correctly spelt words, but in the wrong context. Ugh!
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