All Comments on 'Jill'

not a bad story but could it have been longer more back ground or something they had to overcome look forward to reading more

Did he pay cash for the ring? ,Or did he charge it and if he charged it did it fit. I was just wondering. If you want to finish this story be my guest.

And then this happened, then this, then this, etc.

This is not a story, it's a list!

when are you going to finish the story?