All Comments on 'Jill and Max - Her Awakening'

As soon as "he grabbed her by the waste" I was gone.

The main character's first name switches back and forth fromJen to Jill. Interesting story though.

Good story but a little confusing as you keep calling her both Jill and Jen.

Keep writing and read story over before submitting

Makes you wish you were there, i would love to have been in Jills position.

BlueBalls