by hoover789
Well, if they keep it together and just have fun with themselves, all the better. If he starts showing her off or allowing others to use her, then the story takes a dark sinister and ugly turn.
wish not as much arguing - we get it - she is reluctant and he doesn't care. Why keep throwing that in the reader's face over and over and over?
Love the details about her stockings, pantyhose and high heels. Keep up the great work.
Hoover... She's HOT, but I agree with others, time for her to either buy-in, or bail. Non-con is not my favorite story type... At some point the sex needs to become fun. She's too HOT, to waste the effort crying and being miserable. Just my thoughts. I'm gonna keep reading though as I do like Jill, and want to see where you take this.