by hoover789
You seem to. Have no. Concept. Of Sentence. Structure. This shit. Is super. annoying to read.
Then. don't. Read my stuff. Anymore. Or better yet write something yourself.
OK story, but what an annoying, self centred idiot you made the guy into.
Ouch! that hurts, he is a mirror image of myself, wait to you see part two.
Good premise.
But sex was too quick. Too automatic. Too mechanical.
Needed her to do a little something besides lie there and get felt up and fucked.
Not believable that a woman so well endowed, and so into teasing her husband with her tits would never have been titty fucked.
And you really need to learn when to use THERE vs. THEY'RE vs. THEIR.
Three stars.
How did you get the idea she teased her husband? Some women don't like titty fucking, beside her husband might be a whimp.
Well, rape is rape. I hope that she busts his balls; or let's her husband do it with some help from some friends.
I don't mind when a woman has had a couple of drinks, but this woman clearly has a drinking problem. In my experience, a man should get her home and leave immediately since she isn't going to be any fun anyway after puking and passing out.