All Comments on 'Jillybean'

You had all that buildup, got your readers all involved, and then nothing? While most of the story was great, I have to say this ended up being on of the most unfulfilling and disappointing stories I've ever read on here. I hope you continue this story or it will be a great disservice to the reader of this site.

... which puts the story in the romance category. romantic is romantic and stroke is stroke. don't be confused. maxdname: congratulations on an unusual story that teases and then satisfies in an uncommon way.

A lovely story. A great build up to an interesting conclusion. Well written and with a happy ending, I think another chapter could not do this story justice.

Great story! I truly enjoyed it, though I can admit that I wouldn't mind seeing these two characters again. Thanks for a great read!

A most satisfying story!

Boyd

The perfect love story. It was fantastic, great build up, great characters. Can't wait to read more from you.

A lovely story, thank you. 'tho I mus agree, it could have continued a bit further - or is this a cunning plan to hook us onto a multi-part story?? Please, please!!

Very endearing tender young love. Thank you. Obviously, a five star story.

This is a lovely little romance story of an enduring love that has finally came to fruition. I'm in agreement with Spike that their first time should be special and not there. Good story but a shame there isn't any follow up.

So Sweet. Sooo RomantiC. I Love It