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I felt tears welling up in the corners of my eyes as I spoke.
"No one..." I choked. "No one has ever offered me something as beautiful or as special as this. I want you more than the breath of life. But not here. Please, put on your clothes. This will be our beginning and I want it to be something very special."
She sucked in her bottom lip, nodded, and then I heard her sniffle as I watched a tear skid down her cheek.
"I love you, Sean." She quickly threw her hand over her mouth. "Oops... I'm sorry. I mean... uh..." She cried quietly as she searched for the right words
I kissed her lips shut. Then I trailed a string of kisses across her eyes, her neck, and then back to her lips again.
"Mother Mary berry," I whispered. "I'm yours, Jillybean."
She wept openly in my arms.
- COMMENTS
oldpantythiefabout 4 years agoThis is a lovely little romance story of an enduring love that has finally came to fruition. I'm in agreement with Spike that their first time should be special and not there. Good story but a shame there isn't any follow up.
phil2213about 10 years agoVery endearing tender young love. Thank you. Obviously, a five star story.
EmmSeaover 16 years agoA lovely story, thank you. 'tho I mus agree, it could have continued a bit further - or is this a cunning plan to hook us onto a multi-part story?? Please, please!!
Anonymousover 16 years agoThe perfect love story. It was fantastic, great build up, great characters. Can't wait to read more from you.
sharonaover 16 years agoGreat story! I truly enjoyed it, though I can admit that I wouldn't mind seeing these two characters again. Thanks for a great read!
Anonymousover 16 years agoA lovely story. A great build up to an interesting conclusion. Well written and with a happy ending, I think another chapter could not do this story justice.
satyricon.21over 16 years ago... which puts the story in the romance category. romantic is romantic and stroke is stroke. don't be confused. maxdname: congratulations on an unusual story that teases and then satisfies in an uncommon way.
Anonymousover 16 years agoYou had all that buildup, got your readers all involved, and then nothing? While most of the story was great, I have to say this ended up being on of the most unfulfilling and disappointing stories I've ever read on here. I hope you continue this story or it will be a great disservice to the reader of this site.
