All Comments on 'JJ and Ashley Ch. 09'

Can't wait

Great chapter just like the previous ones. It's so good.

Ashley should have known that the 2 woman were there, JJ did text her and told her I guess ashley did not expect them to still be there, but I get the feeling that there is something more to this story, but we will see

With the other chapters. Very well written and thought out. I love seeing a new chapter of JJ and Ashley. Thanks for a great thread.

Yes.

I can definitely see the seam that you mentioned in the remark.

Not lost your spark, but it got darker and less optimistic.

That doesnt mean that the second half isnt good. It *IS*. It's interesting, and adds to JJ's believability.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot.

The sex scene was great. and the relationship was great.

And the cliff hanger... Well, I hope you dont keep us waiting for too many months this time :)

Thank you for the huge effort and for your talent.

In just in time for Christmas! What could we as for more!!!

I have to agree with the previous anon about the hiccup in the story as I too see it as a perfect example of real life made into a story, it gave the characters the chance to grow and portrayed the struggle hiding in them.

Though ending it in a cliffhanger isn't good for my ticker I shall try to relax over my eggnog and cake to survive it to the next chapter :)

5* as usual and now more than ever looking forward to more.

I have waiting on this chapter!!!!! I love it! Chapter 10 soon please!?!?!?

this was amazing.. you definitely didn't lose your spark.. But please dont take so long to write the next chapter!!

I kinda understand what you meant when you said you lost your spark, I think you didn't intend to make the story darker toward the end but it made JJ's character and everyone else's more believable. I just hope that you won't give up on this amazing story and on us!

Chapter 10 please.

It's great to have you back! You worried me at the beginning with your opening statement! But after reading it through I completely understand. There's many possibilities, I like the one you took. Am I sensing that you avoided more heartbreak for them? Or is that what's coming in the next chapter.... thank you so much for keeping this wonderful story going for us to enjoying! TS

Listen to me, I know you probably have a life and other priorities, but please don't make me wait another 20 years for chapter 10. This is my favorite series on this site!! You do an amazing job.

I loved the direction this is going, keep them coming please, the characters are really well written and real.

Well done. Don't stop.

FF

nice n great, chapter 10 pls i can't wait to read more

You're right - this is not as tightly woven as the previous - but still compelling. Where do JJ and Ashley end up???

I didn't see any problems with your story. It is Great, as always. Just keep up the good work and keep on writing!!!

Please don't keep us waiting... we know your private life interferes but please we need the next chapter soon.

Thank you for sharing the lovely story. More please!!!

Please please please continue with this! This is hands down one of my favourite series on Lit and it drives me nuts checking almost daily for a new chapter <3

Next one, please!!!

Hallo DarkFang!

Brilliant! ... Just as beautifully written as always, and the sex is hotter than hell! ...

Jackie and I think that maybe, you should look into having "JJ and Ashley" published,,, yes! 😘

Hmm (ein aufregendes Klippenende!) _ an exciting cliff end! ... (5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms!).... Thank-you..

Gay Kat.

Kat was right.

Big 5 :-)

Seriously, this is you having lost your spark!?!?!!! I've not read the final chapter but this was awesome! I really have to get an account.

J

You just letting me ge part of the story, standing beside ..... Great

Great writing!