All Comments on 'Jo Ch. 01'

Lovely, sexy story and nothing more enioying like when your girl friend begs you to take her annally while sje loves it all through and orgasms from it.

Wish I could have and marry her,

With such a female who would I want more because I will fuck her ass everyday to satisfy he lovingly,

Good premise.

Terrible story.

You write, at least sometimes, as if you'te texting. Why? It's annoying.

Sex is poorly described. Sort of 'listed' rather than described.

Not the least bit erotic.

One star.

It seemed very unlikely. The rapid change from semi modest to anal, video and piss slut tends the story towards fantasy. Not to mention the pissing in the lounge and on the stairs.

God what I wouldn't give to find and marry a girl like that.

In my opinion that's the king of girl you bring home to meet Mom.