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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ARE YOU A DENTIST?

Like waiting to get my tooth drilled...Your story started off with some intrigue but quickly regressed to nothing more than the repettative question "is she my daughter?" Pleaz zzzzzzzzzzzzz snore....Wheres the Fire the Spark ?

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