All Comments on 'Joan'

Although there are some minor quibbles with Joan,s motivations,this is a very good,well written story.I am looking forward for more.

I can't say enough of your description of Joan. She is exactly the kind of woman who should appear in erotica more often. I hope you write many more stories.

After interviewing a lady off 50, Janet,it was late .I was going passed her place so i offered to drop her off.In my car she asked me what her job chances were.I said i was probably going to employ another lady.Stopping outside her place she said she really needed the job, her hand went to my zipper, then pulled it down,my cock popping out,she stroked it, then put her lips over it and sucked me, her fingers stroking my balls.I pulled my pants down further, one of her fingers found my hole, pushed up into it,Im cumming i said as her finger worked into me.I shot my load into her mouth, she swallowed the lot, sucking until i could take no more.She said, you like a finger in your arse,i smiled, she said i like a cock in mine.She got the job.

i never ever leave comments, too lazy hehe!!but this story was the best story ever. well at least to me because i love stories involving older round big titted curvy voluptious woman. ur discription of joanne was gr8, i can actually close my eyes and c her. thank cant wait for more

I find it difficult to belive that this is the only posting on this site. More is needed as you write quite well.

Sure hope there is alot more to CUM !!!! Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

this was the first story by you i read. i really liked it . i want to read lots more

Well paced and literate story......very nice.

Your story had me locked in from the beginning. Very well done!

I knew a girl and she had mountains of tits

Something like EE or F cup. Big as your head.

Always had trouble making her come until I found out she liked to be spanked.

After that discovery she came every time.

How have I missed this story before, my favourite subject and well paced and written.

Thank you. Will read your other offerings too now.

There are several chapters to this story but all with the same description. Wish give the reader some clue. Good Descriptions but for myself with he had to do more to convince her - sounds like she was just waiting for him to make the move.

While a little more character development would have made this first chapter that much better, it is still a lovely romantic story.