All Comments on 'Joan Takes a Big Step'

Great story, a real turn on. I loved the edge of it being outdoors and in the tent with the boys not far away. The threesome was beautifully detailed and exciting. I could almost feel that I was taking part. The well written story encouraged me to check out the others written about Joan, they left me eager to read the next one.

Good story the swapping thing was ok up until the end. which was stolen time together with Chris. That was cheating

Fiction is good, but true life is always better, especially in this type of lifestyle. I really enjoyed your telling of your true-life experiences, Joan & Max. All of your stories are excellent and so exciting to read. This is my favorite type of story, where the wife is shared in a loving and sexy way, and especially when the wife realy wants this herself, rather than just the husband wanting it for his entertainment. Thie is the sexy charm of Joan, where as she is a little reluctant, with her husband's encouragement, she really enjoys exposing her body and then enjoying what her body can give to other men. Absolutley wonderful, and the question is, when can we have more from you two??? ebauer39@aol.com

I always "get off" on your graphic, well written stories but this one seemed to have to much unneeded detail. Maybe it's just me...

love your series. Excellent prose. the attention to detail is great. must writers would have rushed this into a few paras.

Have to catch up on the rest.

It is 2 pages & one paragraph long.

It is VERY EROTIC and a LOVE STORY at the same time.

I wish my wife were morw like Joan.

I am in my mid sixties yet the action in the tent caused me a tent.

Saying good by scene was the icing on the cake!

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(5+ stars)

I LOVED the scene where he asks his wife Joan whether she liked what she saw... She described the college student's ass... They fully understood each other: he offered her a Hall Pass, she took it without much ado. The two of them are born for each other.

THE WIFE IS A KEEPER.

If I were her husband I'd think I died & gone to Heaven.

The cuck can boys eat this shit up don't they? About what you would expect from a Shower.

'A very erotic story. Well done. Who would have thought such a sexy story could arise out of a family of five camping.

Nothing cuck about this. Great story. 5 stars.