by engywwok
it's about time you got back to writing this tale. Don't make us wait nearly as long for the next chapter.
it's a very good story please continue, this is one of the best I have read
I wish U could wrote something about their daughter going black...
IMO, one of the 4-5 most well written and thought out IR stories at Lit. Would love to see how the rest of Joan's year went. Surely there's more to the story than this.
Just noticed you started a new story. I was hoping you would continue this one first. Any plan on doing so?
Loved this story. Would love to read lots more. I really thought Cora would become involved like her mom. Please add some more, great story.
between a blackmailer, a whore & a man so weak in character & courage that he doesn't have the balls to do anything but accept a punk bitch's seconds. Whatever floats your leaky broke ass boat.
I thought this story was great. I loved it when Joan was fucked in public by a black stranger plus her sucking off another black stranger. I was diappointed that she had not been black bred yet. I loved the Idea one person made about getting one or both daughter blackened. Joan would definitely be able to sing the praises of going black. Between Joan and Kevin they could make sure the daughters received the kind of training to turn both of them into white sluts for black cock. It would really be sweet if mother and both daughters were black bred.
This is too good to stop here!
She's been fucking Kevin for the better part of a year - bareback & unprotected - so the odds have to catch up to her. When are you going to have her pregnant with Kevin's baby?
Does Kevin match her up with another black cock for while he's away at university?
Does she get pregnant by THAT guy?
How does hubby deal with her and other black men? Does he finally grow a pair and forbid further liasons?
Write, write!
Love the slutty submissive white woman enjoying being used by a young, black student and can understand her husband getting off in this situation. Do hope that you continue on with this story
One of my favourite stories. I wish there would be a sequel. Any chance you would post the following chapters?
A truly fantastic story. I enjoyed ever dripping word of it.
Is this all? Part of me understands that leaving us hanging is delicious. But...but I want more! Don't fall further jnto the cliche's; don't have her get pregnant. Don't get Cora involved. Just give us more submission, more risk of getting caught; more mindless worship of this boy's cock. You could tease us for years! lol I am so totally hooked on Joan's addiction I'm about to do something (else) totally stupid, myself! :-)
Kacey
Hi. I second that. I can see you are still active. Any chance you would continue this story? One of my favorites. Thanks in advance.
Hi,
Any chance for more chapters? Could you please at least tell us if you ever plan on continuing this story, so we know if we need to keep on checking or if we have to give up any hope.
Thanks.
You should give this a twist and let her meet a few guys and then when she's having a big gangbang her husband turns up and they confess him and Kevin ever since the very beginning with the pictures have been planning all this stuff all along as a revenge both of them together.
This r of a friend when was in the army we was away a lot so what he did very cleverly he bought the spy phone software and put it on her phone without her knowing. At work he could track her movement and listen to what was going on by calling the phone secretly without it answering and even see her messages photos it was great. The husband should do it . So he secretly knows what's going on before she tells him.
What you have written is a psychologically intelligent book of superb erotica. It was too good to speed read so I took my time in order to study your words, sentences, paragraphs, and chapters. My only complaint? It ended! It has been years since I read something so erotic that it stimulated not simply my body but my mind and the mind is where only the best erotica can be found. Your story is, now, forever in my mind.
I like the story but you need to do more of it like having Kevin sharing Joan with roomy and have Kevin make Joan fully shave her pussy and have Kevin get Joan pregnant with his badly