All Comments on 'Jocks of the South Pt. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love the story

Can.Nick meet up with Matt when.he on.California for the week and can.it be longer than t

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
No Matt

Just show how much they are into each other maybe phone and skype sex.

CreamyKitty22CreamyKitty22almost 8 years ago
Ugh

A month is too long. How about within a week

chrisunderchrisunderalmost 8 years ago
Don't go to California!!!

I'm damn sure Nick will meet Matt again once he gets to California. Again, amazing work! You surely make the hottest sex scenes here. Maybe Francis and Nick could do some skype sex then he surprises Nick in California and actually date him out in the open. Again, amazing work I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Team Nick and Francis

Love Nick and Francis together. Matt needs a man of his own.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Come on, Francis!

Francis is certainly one sexy, horny guy -- very handsome to look at and I'm sure, to touch and taste. But he needs to go through with the "69" and suck Nick's cock. He's been there in Nick's pubes, just has not carried through. If Francis notes how great it feels to have Nick suck him, why can't he return the favor? Really think they are growing together in love, and when Francis finally gets there, he'll see it's great! Nick already knows that feeling. They kiss and hug and taste and touch -- let them both have the physical pleasures. Francis is one sexy and loving guy beneath that exterior! They are REALLY great together now -- imagine their mutual pleasure when they really "get there." Hope they go on to marry each other!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
no, not Matt!

As much as i love Matt and think he's really sexy, i hope nothing happens between them while Nick is in california! that would mess things up really badly between Francis and Nick, as well as Francis and his brother. Francis is only now just starting to open up to Nick so I think doing anything with Matt would be a mistake, and it would probably cause Francis to shut down again. I hope Nick is strong enough to resist, and I hope Matt doesn't act like a dick and try to seduce Nick or anything. Team Francis and Nick! I love the both of them and i hope we see even more of a softer side from Francis. He really is a sweet guy. anyway, great story and i can wait until the next one. the wait is gonna be killer

CuriousPeteCuriousPetealmost 8 years ago
HOT HOT HOT

This was a very hot chapter and kept me quite hard. I do agree with one of the other commenters about Francis giving head to Nick. He needs to pleasure Nick in that way. But keep it going. It's fun and hot to read.

nauticalstevenauticalstevealmost 8 years ago
horny

Love this series... always gets me horny as hell while reading it. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great progress. Francis is slowly opening up. He really cares for Nick and seems to be falling in love. He needs to be more reciprocal and suck Nick’s sick, swallow his cum, and let Nick fuck him in the ass. Experience it all together. And definitely no hook-ups in CA - with Matt or anyone. If they cheat on each other while they’re apart then what was this story leading up to?!

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