All Comments on 'Jodie's Story'

...perhaps a little too short and snappy for me. I was just starting to roll along with the characters and suddenly a dead stop. I'm sure you'll pick up on it, Shaima, you've never let your readers down yet, it just came as a surprise. Still, I've always enjoyed your tales and you're bound to have something good up your sleeve for the next chapter(s). Looking forward to them.

And I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you for sharing this with us!

So glad your name and story popped up in "new stories", I am with Monaigh in regards to it being a tad short, but hey it's a bit like a thirsty camel getting to a small well after having been through the desert. Loved the black sheep bit. It's the details in your stories.. Cheers

I anticipate this being an excellent story series, as virtually all Shaima32 postings are. Hopefully Ch. 2 of Jodie's story will be posted soon and significantly longer than the intro, allowing readers to really become invested in the love story.

Again taken by heart ...... And for two pages a lot happen, but in reality things turn even faster .... Bum crash different life and living conditions ....... So yeah another great story and lovely as usual ..... Thank you for sharing