All Comments on 'Joe'

well written and enjoyable

But wot a dilemma. A girls best friend may not survive the heady sex with her bloke stolen kisses, can her relationship survive?

Please, want a part too.

Anna .x

Beautifully written, sexy and romantic

Excellent first effort

Very nice job for your first story. I'm waiting for Oct 13th...

This was a great start! I could see this developing into a series, it has awesome potential. You brought me right back to my own 18 year old summer, filled with the magic of young love, human connection, and the promise of possibilities. Oh, and the sex scene was definitely arousing, and well paced.

Kudos!

Very nice and sweet!

Wow! Sexy and hot yet tempered with sweetness. Keep it up.

Advice: this is your story and your characters. Tell the story the way you want to. Don't do something (like a happy ending or sad ending or whatever) because you think your readers want it or it'd be reviewed better.

R.

Many "just friends" have feelings for each other and neither want to make the first move. It is better to make a move, than regret it the rest of your life. Once the barrier is broken there is a tremendous feeling of relief and also great joy.

This felt so real. Please keep up the good work. I loved the writing style and lucid flow. Would love to see your next story.

Cheaters are such trash... What kind of person deifys them?