All Comments on 'John and Julie'

Ejoy the feeling you put in your writing. Waiting for the next story!

John and Julie are actually 3rd cousins. Julie and John's dad would be second cousins. Good story tho

Decently written, but very predictable.

In 24 states it is legal to marry even your first cousin. and federal law requires every state to accept the union regardless of state laws voiding the it.

......it finished in mid air. It left us to imagine how things transpired.

Which is not good. It's 'your' story and 'you' need to end it in the way 'you' want it to finish.

Please, write a sequel, even if it's only half a page, but please finish it how 'you' want it to end !

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