John and Sue Ch. 6

"...but concerning the 34 various STDs, skin conditions, secondary infections, and immune disorders I caught from my 'playmates,' well, those might never..."

This was a sick story about a slut wife and the husband who put up with her fucking around on him. I hated the story and I give it only one star.

I like the comment made by the commentator about; "He made contact with some of his former buddies that he knew from Nam" That is a great explanation on how Sue was rescued. As for the man that "bought" her... If his former buddies were anything like the guys I knew... All of those partaking in human trafficking would've disappeared...The cops would never have known. Plus, there wouldn't be any blood... instead of firearms, they'd have used tasers... Wrapped the bodies in cellophane cutting off their air supply and taken to a remote area to be disposed of. Much like what the Soviets did to get all their captives, papers, etc. back from the Iranian take over of their Embassy in Tehran in days while the U.S. tried diplomacy which failed...Months later, then the "moment" Reagan got elected. they released the American hostages immediately. Remember President Ronald Reagan. He's the guy that caused the collapse of the old Soviet Union which caused the Russians pulling out of Eastern Europe.

John had to leave town for a new job interview... but before he left He made contact with some of his former buddies that he knew from "Nam". Without Sue knowing, they had rented the empty house across the street. watching the house and Sue. When Greg and his "friends" showed up... They went into action.... Black uniforms, Protective bullet proof vests... Black helmets..., They stormed into the house and back yard... Sue heard the bangs... She had closed her eyes to open them and she was being cut loose... The pool area around her was very bloody... John's friends were thoughtful enough to have a couple of "friends" wearing civilian clothes with a big video camera, a sound man like they were making a movie... A big van showed up... "people" entered the house to "clean-up" The van backed up to the open garage and all the bodies were loaded up... wrapped up like mummies in cellophane. When they left. The house, pool area, etc. was as clean as a whistle... Those Tattoos, were actually decals... This is why John never noticed tattoo's on her body when he came home.

Nope, I don't believe for a moment that a husband can take back a wife after she became a whore.

@anon below: I disagree with your view on negative feedback. I hate that sites like literotica give authors so much control over the comments section.

There was a lot of potential to this story. My biggest issue was why didn't Sue tell John right away what she did at the photoshoot? Did Gregg, go home with her and spend all of his time in front of them and followed Sue every where to make sure she didn't say anything. I didn't realize that Gregg was in the bedroom with them to make sure Sue didn't talk. Of course, this did not happen, which makes me more mad at Sue. Yes, she was drugged. The drug was given to her with the possibility that it "could" have long term effects. It would have been nice if the author would have explained that, like , if you take it for week, you will have the effects for at least 10 years. This would have made it more palatable. Remember several times she was fine until she was forced to have sex, then she lost it. Because she didn't tell John, I believe John should have divorced her. It was stated by one of the comments, that love conquers all. But really, John was very weak. Overall, I think the author had good intensions. I agree with the authors comments to one of the Anon comments, that if you are going to be negative, then state why it was bad. I will re-read this again at a later time to see if my comments should be changed.

Hmmm, this is why the kkk exist.....

As to the hubby, what a fuckin loser.

Hey man......enough with the bull shit and comments! One well placed grenade will get all the mother-fuckers!

I mean, if a man honestly shares his fantasies....that means the wife will have to share him with other women. It's like the most common male fantasy, FFM threesome. And honestly after all that's happened, that would help heal them both. Especially if the other women was black with a big ol booty.

What can be said. She should have gone with him on his interviews away. He should have had alarms and cameras fitted to the house. Personal alarms around the neck. This author is one sick puppy.