All Comments on 'John Becomes my Cum Slut'

Far too short to be considered a story.

You keep changing the narrator with no warning. Try to keep some consistency.

Points well taken. I will try to do better.

skimmed it wont be reading you stuff again

Good set of stories, no matter what ND43 says. Keep up the good work.

ND43 rude disrespectful uncalled for pitiful human being if you really felt your comment was necessary,

I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

I would love to be used like John

Story didn't make much sense. Obviously just a quick jerk off for those enjoying degradation. Maybe flesh it out more. Why did she want to do this to her long time lover? This could easily have gone bad for her.