All Comments on 'John set His Wife Up with a Lesbian Pt. 02'

Your writing is really difficult to read, mainly because it's so juvenile & unpolished. I've read both chapters & can't for the life of me understand why you continue posting such poorly rated & badly criticised stories. Obviously you want to write but it'd really help if you learned & studied the craft of short storyfiction before you post more of this horridly plotted & badly written stuff. It's really shameful.

Pretty rough. It was pretty difficult to follow all the way through, and would have been better had you included what happened once Lynne arrived. Have you considered using an editor to tighten up your stories?

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I would have loved to have done that for my wife to set her up with a sexy woman,it did happen on its own now she has 5 girlfriends this all happened after we couldn't have sex that often after menopause she lost her natural lube so each time we tried to have sex it would hurt at least i know she's having fun and awesome orgasms. Please continuebthis story. 73AE

I want my wife Jacki to be seduced and fall in love like this with our next door neighbor Anne!