All Comments on 'Johnny's Conquest: Lucky in AC'

It's good straightforward fun, keep at it. You'd be well advised to read your work over before submitting it, though, as there are distracting mistakes here and there, such as "the two exchanged me kisses", "that want you want" and "stationary".

This chapter of the main character Johnny is well-written, with a plot that holds the attention of the reader from start to finish. The romantic atmosphere wonderfully embellishes the story as it unfolds. Five stars.