All Comments on 'Johnny's Conquests: Picture Perfect'

by RR004

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kiwiloverkiwiloverover 9 years ago
Great Dialogue

I really enjoyed the dialogue you got going here. The scene was nicely set too but it was the speech that got it going.

It might have been nicer still if there was a little more descriptive work. A bit reminiscent of Jane Austin as it stands. Still, worth 4 stars any day.

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