All Comments on 'Joint Venture'

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TizlersTizlersover 4 years ago
Loved it - Plus a little thank you

Great little storie love the setting(big Mass Effect fan)very likeable character's, I'd love to see these characters again or maybe even other stories with other races from Mass Effect.

I've never really commented on any of your stories but I've been following you now for a few years and i enjoy all your stories thank you for all the time and work you put in to them, I look forward to your next upload.

Thanks :D

airgodairgodover 4 years ago
Great Story

I agree some more of them would be great. Would be interesting to hear about the human and the Krogan couple that was mentioned in the beginning.

WhatthehellmanWhatthehellmanover 4 years ago
Immediately a favorite

Huge fan of the mass effect series and of human/turian couples. I really hope we see more of these characters in the future possibly with simon meeting val's parents to continue the story

SnekguySnekguyover 4 years agoAuthor
@Tizlers

And thank you for reading!

Glad you guys enjoyed this one, I just finished re-editing Black Velvet, and I have another Pinwheel story on the works, hope you guys look forward to it.

gazzclubgazzclubover 4 years ago
So well thought out

I loved you put so much thought and detail into what human man / turian woman lovemaking would be like. A great romantic story that was amazingly sensuous too. And the Mass Effect details were fun too.

Archangel_MArchangel_Malmost 4 years ago
Adorable

Sweet, hot, and wonderfully imaginative in its pushing of ME canon. Bravo! <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I would love to see a part two of this. (Two first responders, I'm sure they've had a few adventures)

BoredInQuarantineBoredInQuarantine4 months ago

“I’m commander Shepard and this is my favorite stor(y) on the Citadel!” :D

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