All Comments on 'Jolene's Difficult Decision'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

This is fitting follow up to the Phil/Nina story!

5

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 1 year ago

Great follow up. Well Done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Glad I went back and reread the Phil & Nina story, it made this one even more enjoyable. Good job, and I look forward to your next offering.

Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

Great follow up. The way you ended this story I'm hoping you have more to come. Hope so. 5stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Agreed with anon that this was more enjoyable in context of the Phil & Nina story. It can stand alone, though.

My enjoyment was somewhat muted by lack of proofreading & copy editing. "Her's", misplaced quotation marks, etc. Nonetheless, the story itself was very good.

teedeedubteedeedubover 1 year ago

This is good well written stuff. Thanks for sharing.

DrizdartDrizdartover 1 year ago

A lovely romance.

LlornaLlornaabout 1 year ago

I love Phil's Cabin every time I read it, and I'm delighted to find this story. Thank you for telling us Jolene's story.

Keep writing!

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