by PickFiction
Glad I went back and reread the Phil & Nina story, it made this one even more enjoyable. Good job, and I look forward to your next offering.
Great follow up. The way you ended this story I'm hoping you have more to come. Hope so. 5stars
Agreed with anon that this was more enjoyable in context of the Phil & Nina story. It can stand alone, though.
My enjoyment was somewhat muted by lack of proofreading & copy editing. "Her's", misplaced quotation marks, etc. Nonetheless, the story itself was very good.
I love Phil's Cabin every time I read it, and I'm delighted to find this story. Thank you for telling us Jolene's story.
Keep writing!