All Comments on 'Jolene's Trip to Vegas'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Inside of?

Great story this, but you use phrases quite a few on this site also use "inside of" when referring to putting something inside a womans parts. You can see the inside of something, but not put something inside of - it's inside it.

jwp6199jwp6199almost 4 years ago
WOW

Well written with excellent pacing.

Wildling3xWildling3xalmost 4 years ago
What happens in Vegas....

Great intensity and lust fueled picture created by your words. Look forward to read more of your submissions

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