All Comments on 'Jon After Eva: An Epilogue'

Bravo!

5

Just one word. Excellent!

Very well done, and you left room for more!

I never enjoyed love stories before this.

A great follow=up to EVA. Well done. Thank-you.

Wow!!

Well I think we've heard it all now ! Here's another word Superlative. Your writing is superb. Please ask Jon if he has anything more to share not to stay away too long.

There are so many characters’ names to remember in this story. Cammy & Eric? I don’t remember an Eric. Must have been a hundred chapters ago.

I didn't catch that on my proof read, but if it says Eric, it's a mistake. It should be Kyle, who's been her husband for over 30 years since part 16. Eric is a character in a different group of stories. Mea Culpa.

Perfect ending to a fantastic story.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

decent story I would like to have seen jon pass since you killed eva off and have them come together again . sorry you put a hole in my heart with everything that happened to eva sad five

sorry the reason for the first comment was neither belived in god and since they both worked and lived a great life of giveing and teaching that they were both to go to heaven and live HAPPLY ever after .

Warm and loving story. 5/5