by sugarsweet1259
It was going okay until we got to "beef curtains" and then "fuck meat". Seriously?
Usually when I read a historical porn story, I expect historical ACCURACY. Panties, modern names (Murray Ellis? Really?), etc. This isn't accurate.
It probably isn't wise or smart to expect accuracy from a porn story, but shit like the aforementioned things really ruin the immersion.
Do your homework next time.
Hi! Just found your blog..and discovered you were here as well! I do love this story and whatever the negative stuff people have written, I think it's a great yarn and full of good ideas....sequel soon, please!