All Comments on 'Jonna and the Gladiator'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Dreadful euphemisms

It was going okay until we got to "beef curtains" and then "fuck meat". Seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I really liked it! Great job! You should make more(:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Disappointed

Usually when I read a historical porn story, I expect historical ACCURACY. Panties, modern names (Murray Ellis? Really?), etc. This isn't accurate.

It probably isn't wise or smart to expect accuracy from a porn story, but shit like the aforementioned things really ruin the immersion.

Do your homework next time.

josephstevensjosephstevensalmost 11 years ago
Here as Well!

Hi! Just found your blog..and discovered you were here as well! I do love this story and whatever the negative stuff people have written, I think it's a great yarn and full of good ideas....sequel soon, please!

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