by nowiamhere
i think the story itself was ok, i love reading gay porn, esp first time. i think those are the best. the only reason i say i didn't love this story was because i felt it needed some editing. it also felt a little juvenille at times, but all in all it was a good read.
this story..... is random
i like that
soo hot!
-ally
mail me on allytheminx@hotmail.com
You have an interesting style
good job
and who ever left the "fags" comment is probably hiding their own interests
-J
Really enjoyed your story. Very erotic. Was stroking myself all the way through it. Very gentle and erotic scenes. Well done!
It was fairly well written and made a good depiction of very hot sex.
thank you for writing this hot story! i loved it and it made me cum big time :-)
i can't believe you are not experienced yet.
what a sexy mind and great imagination you have!
xxx
BIm
I've only been with a man once (kissing & 69). It was great.After that story you can fuck me any time you want.
i am sitting reading this story it made so hot i have a cock ring on an a virgin i would like to have someone to take my cherry i would gladly give it it to him
i have never tryed this but want too a lot i cum ever time i read this , Like fucking some one and been fucked at the same time this is hottttttt
I'm a guy with a cherry ass. Now I want someone to take my cherry. I have cum about 12 times with your story. Hope to hear from you!
Clayton
claytoncspeck02@verizon.net
That was nice and I'd like to know more about him.That would be interesting...;)