All Comments on 'Josh and Lesley Surprise Each Other'

Being Bi, after reading this story could someone please introduce me to Lesley,Sophie or Josh. Their conversations were so intimate and sweet, I felt almost as if I was intruding on their privacy. Wonderfully gentle and sexy story.

Terri

Burning, blazing, and beautiful and that's the truth, Ruth. Keep them coming; look forward for your next work.

Hot Hot Hot

This was a really erotic piece. I loved it; got my juices flowing... I'm glad you invited me to read it. Keep up the good work...

MistyMorgan

I loved the story. Very nicely written and very erotic. Hope to read more of your stories.

You might have covered the issues a bit more. How would Lesley have felt if it hadn't worked out? Also, the encounter semed short. Surely, they would not have stopped at only one O each. I know that I, even at 53 would have been too excited to sleep or would have woken up after a couple of hours ready for more.

One of the things that makes this stories different from most of those I've read here is the intensive use of dialogue. I know from my own experience that dialouge can be a challendge to do right. The dialogue was fliratious and fun, though early on I sometimes had a difficult time knowing who was speaking. The story is well done and quite fun. Lucky Josh ;)

Effective use of dialogue makes it exquisite...

and he can only last for one orgasm? WHat a loser..

I love petite women! This is a fine fantasy! Good descriptives- Rated Pretty Fuckin' Good!