All Comments on 'Josh Knows Best'

by Turbidus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hopefully she gets pregnant. Read about how big her tits get and a lot of lactation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So hot when selfish, confident moms get what they want…her son has his whole life ahead of him but she couldn’t care less…she wants to feel his fertile semen leaking out of her hot unprotected cunt…that’s what’s important

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Breed her like a good mommy breeder should.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My first time with my mom was everything I hoped as well. She wasn’t very milfy heavy set with 44Double D’s and huge aereas and a good sized nipple. I found her on her knees as I was getting out of the shower she offered to dry me

It started as a hand job turned into a blowjob and she let me cum in her cleavage.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 1 year ago

When Joshua woke up, he was wearing boxer briefs. Then they became boxers. Then shorts. Story wasn't all that bad, but a bit sophomoric.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice! More please!

sp9983sp9983over 1 year ago

I'd like to see where this story goes from here.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Very nice, but the ending was too abrupt. Felt unfinished.

mustang123mustang123over 1 year ago

PLEASE CONTINUE i THINK THERE IS SO MUCH MORE TO TELL

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hi Turbidus, great story! Please continue with more adventures ....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it but there is a lot more where this story could go so please continue!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You have a great imagination. However, putting together the story and taking your reader on an otherworldly journey that cannot be compared to any other relationship was poorly and cheaply done.

Writers on this site are notorious for giving details about a person's body instead of gradually introducing body details into the story.

Example: Most writers just give details and BAM the body details are DONE.

Now, try this style of bodily details.

"A subtle breeze from the north ran like fingers through mom's jet black hair as she strolled up the hill. A coltish stride from long, lean legs came to rest on an old stump I'd planned removing, I'm glad I was tried that day...etc, etc.

Hope this helps.

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Life got awfully busy for a time. I hope to add a few stories again.

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