All Comments on 'Josh's Home Coming'

what a nice story! nothing dire or sad in this one. kind of basic storyline of two people rediscovering each other.

the repartee between Josh and Kimberley is the whole story,really. simply outstanding! so very impressed with your writing ability,giving us two characters who came alive for the readers to enjoy. i felt like these are two people i would really like to know.

thank you for your effort!

don

Completely wonderful, a story enhanced by the sex rather than driven by it, I love it....

I'm so pleased with your success and the quality of your work. In this story you cause respect to flow both ways for and from a story line of interest and eroticism that is based in some reality and is entertaining.

Thanks talented one - more please - with High Regard

This was not great it was outstanding and will go into my special folder without a qualm. It has romance, sex, loving humor, and a great plotline. Did I mention loving humor? You have a very easy smooth style of writing that makes reading your story a pleasure. Thank You for sharing it. Ronnie W.

I enjoyed it but I think I would of enjoyed it more if I didn't get sidetracked by some spelling an other errors. It was good otherwise.

I enjoyed it but I think I would of enjoyed it more if I didn't get sidetracked by some spelling an other errors. It was good otherwise.

Yet another great story, you have the gift. Well done and Many thanks

Simple, sweet, and sexy....it is a nearly perfect short romantic, erotic story. It is also one I have read more than a few times. Well done. Michael

This author is a Kiwi, but in the UK 'rum' used in that context would mean, 'strange' or 'out of the ordinary' but in a not nice way. It's a rather old fashioned slang term that isn't used much now. I hope it's roughly the same in New Zealand.

I'm an American, a lot on the older semester side, and although I haven't heard it used in that way (a bad time, a hard time and so on = a rum time), in a long time, I know it was used in the USA, that way.

CarCam

As I read it was as if someone was telling a story i'd lived. The hunor, the time placement and all I enjoy greatly. Well written. Enjoyed. Thank you.

The sex was excellent but it overshadowed any chance at human emotion. I rated a five but very reluctantly. I would suggest that you engage more on character description and engaging views of human interaction.

But then again, I expected nothing less. Great story, Bazz...

MoogPlayer