by kitten2010
great story, but what happens now, you never to write if Josh ever got his butt or not
please do longer and shorter, take your time, perfection shouldn't be rushed
from zack
I laughed more than I should have with the whole field football thingy with all the numbers you know what I mean anyway, my fav comment was "we're dead" that just iced the cake! Haha
Surely, this is not the end of this story..PLEEEASE FINISH Josh and Ayden's story.!
Please keep writing, your amazing at it & this story gets better & better!!!! Don't stop now please keep writing!!
I'm in love with this story and I know that you said you were going to stop writing for a little while but please hurry and start writing again because this story is amazing and I NEED MORE!!!!!!
cant wait for more it is a great story . love your writing ... good luck for the next part
I love this so much, I've been waiting for so long and it didn't dissapoint.x
Thanks.
I read all chapters tonight as I couldn't stop. This is a brilliant, beautiful story. I love the way you have set up the chapters.
I have to go agree all I want is for this to have a happy ending as they both deserve it.
You are a gifted writer I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope there is a next chapter and thank you
Loved this chapter! I love that Josh stood up and showed everyone that Ayden was his. I teared up during that scene. Please don't let anything bad happen to them. I don't know if I could take it!! :)
This chapter had everything. A bit of drama, okay lots of drama. a hell of a lot of love. Humor,understanding,sex, fear. all of the emotions so raw and wonderful. Absolutely riveting. I think i held my breath a few times. Thank you so much for sharing this tale with all of us. Wow what a ride Kitten!! You go girl!!!!!
I was hyperventilating when I got to Josh's number, I had to turn away for a second, breath in and out a couple of times, then continue with the story I'm so happy for Josh and Ayden. This is it, Josh has to propose soon and I will guarantee a bucket full of tears.
Cows stared at my exposed junk so I was quick about it.
Lol, I love your writing! Keep it up, I'm excited for more.