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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The grammar on this story was horrible. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very nice story but it took a long time for the sex to happen!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Commas, learn to use them.

Otherwise a good slow-burn story that needed some writing mechanics.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Fell asleep reading this. Your dog shit grammar hurt my eyes

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https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1465128&page=submissions About me: Kinky/perverted male that has two major loves when it comes to sex: 1. BJ's. Love receiving them and never turn down a BJ. 2. Mommies. I have had my fair share of mommies and in some cas...