All Comments on 'Journey into Melanie's Reality Ch. 05'

Superb writing! And soooooooo sexy.

Scotsman, I enjoyed your story very much. I think you are a fine author and I have read almost everything you have written and looking forward to other submissions.

Scotsman, you have no idea how many times I check back to see if you post a new story! I was so addicted to Melanie and Sandy I read it over and over again multiple times. Am I ever so glad to see you update this story! And god, is it ever hot! Please don't keep us waiting long for the rest. Keep up the good work. What a great writer you are. Magnificent. Just magnificent. (Should I tell you my batteries are flat AGAIN?)

So glad these new chapters are finally here. This is fantastic stuff; you've got such a good writing style. Can't wait until you post more of your stories. Whatever happened to the sequel you promised, to Culra Bothy? Please? No pressure, mind you. I'm just so glad you're back!