Journey through Desolation

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His trousers were unbuckled, unbuttoned, unzipped, and flared open and she already had gotten the measure of his long, thick, black cock—justifying the rumors—with her hand and then with her mouth and throat as he had crouched in front of where she'd sat on the bed. Her willingness and capability had let him know that she'd had a history before her inattentive, old husband came into the picture.

Better to fuck you by, he'd let run through his brain. She, indeed, was ripe for it.

"Now, now," she murmured after his tongue and lips had taken her breath away and given her an explosion—and then another—and he rose up over her, hooked her legs on his hips, and moved in for the kill. Crying out "Yes, yes, YES!" again and panting hard, groaning, and grasping his now bare hips in her hands, digging her fingernails in, he entered her and held for several moments for her to adjust to the thickness of him. The steady rocking motion of the train, was already animating the fuck, though. He was rocking inside her and she was rocking her hips against his groin. She cried out, "Oh, Fuck!" as he began to pump.

An hour and a half later, before he rose off her, Charlene stretched out on her back on the bed, one arm dangling over the side of the bed and the hand of the other one cupping the back of Shaka's head, Shaka dipped down and feasted on her nipples again. She lay there, exhausted, running her fingers through his long, black hair, which she'd loosed from a tight bun on the back of his head. Her legs were open, turned outward. She was keeping her cunt fully accessible to him, not being able to get enough of the big, black cock. Her eyes were glazed over, a slight smile on her lips, her mouth gently blowing bubbles.

Releasing a nipple he'd been teasing with his teeth, Shaka moved his lips to her ear. "Cruise to New Zealand with me. Sleep in my bed. I'll give you the attention you need, want, and deserve. We'll play the violin and cello for the passengers by day and I'll fuck you on the big bed in the master's cabin every night."

"I can't. I'm a married woman," Charlene murmured in a weary voice that may not even have convinced herself.

"I love fucking married women," Shaka responded.

* * * *

The conductor helped Charlene down the steps from the sleeping coach at 7:08 the next morning. The train had arrived at Sydney Central at 6:58 exactly as scheduled and the conductor had lowered the steps to the coach before the next minute had been reached. She was moving gingerly. She was wearing the wide-legged navy-blue pants and white blouse Liam had laid out for her to travel in. The jacket to the pants was folded over her arm, though. She was prepared to show that much independence and let her chest push out without being covered by a jacket, even knowing the Liam was coming to the station to meet her—and to drive her out of Sydney and into the desolate countryside at the far end of the Hunter Valley to the northwest. Even more than this, she knew she was wearing the lacy panties and bra under the pants suit. Liam would never know she had.

She knew that they would make no stops—no restaurant meal, no frivolous shopping, no coffee down on the Circular Quay or in Darling Harbour. No extension of any sort of this first "vacation" of their married life.

Looking toward the station, she saw that Shaka had left the train as soon as the steps had been lowered. He was already off the platform running out to the trains and on the apron between the station house and the trains. As yesterday, he was impeccably dressed, meltingly handsome, a gleaming chocolate brown, sleek black hair, let down today, brushing his shoulders. He'd had it up in bun at the back of his head when they'd been in the bar car. He'd let Charlene take it down and run her fingers through it while he was fucking her. He had left it down today. As a symbol that they needn't be finished fucking?

As if he sensed Charlene had stepped down from the train, he turned by a door into the station and smiled. He gave no direction. He had told her that any decision was hers alone. She had told him in the night that she just couldn't leave her husband and float off to New Zealand or Fiji or wherever, and Shaka had said it had to be her decision.

Liam Larson was also on the apron, off to the left, whereas Shaka had gone to the right. Liam was turned away from her, arguing over something with a man in uniform handling a baggage cart. Liam hadn't seen her yet.

Perhaps if he had dressed in anything other than the soiled work clothes he worn when pruning the grape vines when he'd come to pick her up . . .

Charlene went into motion, walking toward the station. When she got to the end of the platform, she turned right toward Shaka. The journey through desolation was behind her now—what she saw ahead of her was the exotic tropical foliage of Fiji.

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ishtatishtatover 5 years ago
Well written

I suppose the fact that this is an LW story attracted the absurd/ignorant comments. I have done the train journey myself and know the Upper Hunter very well (And the guy that said the Hunter was a red wine region! oh dear - it's best wine is Semillon, but you do get a variety of decent stuff in the upper Hunter - better than around Cessnock in the Lower Hunter.

Anyway back to the story - well written by a highly competent artisan (Big compliment)

Three characters, including Liam, all well drawn. The most important point to get perhaps, is that it is a journey through psychological desolation for the heroine as much as a physical journey. A tight write, no superfluous verbiage. Easy 5.

InsigniaInsigniaover 5 years ago
This story

Seemed a bit choppy and could have flowed better. The characters were well drawn and the set up worked. The bar car, scenery and the valley are pretty lame nit picks. The story had a lot more depth than most and was enjoyable. 4 🌟 easily.

sr71pltsr71pltover 5 years agoAuthor
For the Record

For the record, yes, I've been to Australia. I've been to Melbourne and Sydney (and around New Zealand on a cruise from Sydney)--and loved the country and cities, and I've ridden the train from Melbourne to Sydney both during the day (the landscape from the train is desolate outside the cities) and at night (and I've been to most everywhere else in the world too, and can compare). No, there's no bar car on that train, but I needed it for the story, tried to make it sound like it was unusual, and if you don't know about literary license, you probably shouldn't be so anal retentive as to be reading fiction. And, yes, I've been to Newcastle and to the Hunter Valley--and out to the end of the Hunter Valley where the lushness of the valley peters out and where the vineyards become hard scrabble work in desolate surroundings. For the literary challenged, "desolation" was being played on the two levels of the landscape (taking the day train from Melbourne to Sydney in January was, indeed, one of the most boring twelve hours of my life) and the protagonist's life. The man on the train was there as an extreme change of pace for the protagonist, not as a "happy ever after" ideal man to please the juvenile reader on some elementary school level or some man who has been jilted in life and is out to take it out on anyone posting a story to Loving Wives. As for the category, look again at what the Web site says this category is. This story meets that criterium, and if you personally don't think so, you can stuff it. The Green Es on my list refer to Editor's Choices--stories that Laurel, the editor, have identified as especially good reading. I have 11 of them, including one for a previous Loving Wife story, so if you don't think I can write to the Loving Wives category as defined by Laurel, the site editor, feel free to show me YOUR list of Loving Wife stories. I wrote this to contribute to a special Australia category exercise, not to try to please those who love to criticize and fight in the Loving Wives category, because pleasing those who obsess over this category ain't gonna happen.

dragonmann72dragonmann72over 5 years ago
Anon: Clear author knows nothing of Australia

I like to think of myself as a kind of Devil's Advocate. I read a story and it either sits well with me or it doesn't. If I choose to make a comment on a story I don't read I still do a little research first.

About sr71plt

1002 submissions

plenty of red H's and some green E's (I don't know what they are but he has them)

149 submissions in other than Gay male or Trans (I put those the same category)

8 of those in L/W

7 of those were 4 or better

And then this 249 at time of my comment

No I didn't read his other L/W submissions (maybe some day) so to answer your comment 'Why not write a gay story?' he has 853 times.

Reed he just said he was a pilot of the sr71 not his age, it might have only take one flight to change him.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 5 years ago
@ReedRichards

So, you also believe that a wife who invites another woman into their bed, and eats her pussy, is a lesbian?

As for "cocksucker for life," we've all heard "once a cheater, always a cheater," but there ARE people who cheat once and never cheat again, so yeah, a guy who sucks one cock may be a cocksucker for life, it still doesn't make him gay!

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